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Hi MikeIt's great to see you have your EAP up for critiquing and comments. There is strong emotion in the "Aaarrrgh!" pose at the start that I think has good appeal.
From a colleague, a critique:what i liked:the animation was great the action/ crying out and the begining gives us a idea what's going onthe end push up and back handstand flip over was great and very good use of LOAnicely timed outthe anticipation for this jump couldn't be posed any betteri like the fact the character is keeping an eye on where he is landingthe landing pose and te counter weight for this pose is awesome improvments:at the begining the head is shaking side to side but so do the hands in time with the headafter the "Rawww!" he's getting up but the right knee is moving maybe a bit too muchinstead of sliding his right foot forward he could have shifted his weight over to his left foot and then lifted his rightit's good to have a last point of contact and stretching your poses are also good but this was too much and his head should be looking up or at the landing position, drag is also good but not needed in this posehe reaches the peak of the jump but then you have made his butt go even higher, he is going down or it could be an inbetweenthe landing his arms should have come out sooner to brace the landingthere should be more timing aloud for the impact and get upalso there could have been some more timing allowed for the feet to slowly pass over his headand finally the end pose is great but the head does not need to return to the middle he just did a big jump thing leave his head downover all a good peace of work i like it very much the animator went beyond the criteria and did well
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